When the talking stops

I just posted the song "When the Talking Stops" on my website. I'm pretty excited by the process I used in writing the song because I was able to employ many of the new tricks that I just learned. For example:

• Harmonic contrast by having the verses starting and ending on minor chords (giving it a dissident sound). The chorus used major chords (lighter sound).
  
• Each line of the verse was a different length, adding lyrical contrast.

My songwriting experience is getting richer now that I have the tools to better express myself.